Project Critique - Feedback & Notes to Change

Wednesday March 3rd 2021

Below are the 'final' three posters, as I presented them to my peers and my tutor Eleni. I went into the critique session explaining how the posters are not finished, that I was considering adding text and asked everyone what feedback they could give me both on the posters on a whole, and suggestions of any added text I could write to explain my posters further.

Comments and feedback I received included;

- The posters speak for themselves, and some peers thought added text wasnt necessary

- A past, present and future narrative can be identified - The paintings are visible but could a collective border be added? - Some colours of the people in the third and final poster are too similar and blend into the background - If I wanted to add typography, maybe I could think of cohesive slogans - something short and not distracting - Perhaps the orangutans in the second and third posters are too dark - can I make them as bright and noticeable as the first poster? - Can I add something to make the three posters flow together more? Such as blending the backgrounds? - Is there any way i could add more texture to the posters?

As said, I didnt present the posters as final images, so I was more than open to asking for and receiving the feedback I did from Eleni and my peers! It was really useful to understand how others viewed the outcomes for this project and ill be working to develop my work further by making these changes!